This copy is killer! The tone of descriptions on the webpage are hilarious. I like that you have chosen the name "Urban Outliers," but wonder if those wonderfully entertaining hipsters would actually enjoy this classification as they live to be be the outliers in society. Perhaps you would consider using the name "Urban Outcry" as an alternative because no matter how much the hipsters say that they do not want to be like mainstream society, they still love all the attention that comes with having the newest and coolest items... before they were cool.
I love this spoof, yet I love Urban Outfitters! Hahaha. You have a great concept going on, so I would keep advancing it with diffferent pictures. Other than that, I definitely get the Urban Outfitters vibe. Great job!
This looks great! I think the spoof itself for the last two will come across even more once you have taken your own pictures which I know you are planning on doing from the critique. For now I think your website is very successful and very thoroughly done. Awesome work!
Like everyone else, seeing your own photography would be the last element to really push this spoof into intentional territory. The content of the photographs would have to be very similar to the real ads but with an obvious mockery.
This copy is killer! The tone of descriptions on the webpage are hilarious. I like that you have chosen the name "Urban Outliers," but wonder if those wonderfully entertaining hipsters would actually enjoy this classification as they live to be be the outliers in society. Perhaps you would consider using the name "Urban Outcry" as an alternative because no matter how much the hipsters say that they do not want to be like mainstream society, they still love all the attention that comes with having the newest and coolest items... before they were cool.
ReplyDeleteI love this spoof, yet I love Urban Outfitters! Hahaha. You have a great concept going on, so I would keep advancing it with diffferent pictures. Other than that, I definitely get the Urban Outfitters vibe. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis looks great! I think the spoof itself for the last two will come across even more once you have taken your own pictures which I know you are planning on doing from the critique. For now I think your website is very successful and very thoroughly done. Awesome work!
ReplyDeleteLike everyone else, seeing your own photography would be the last element to really push this spoof into intentional territory. The content of the photographs would have to be very similar to the real ads but with an obvious mockery.
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