I think you have a really strong direction with these ads. I love that you have two very different types of ads, one with a photo and one being simply typographic, but they work well with one another. I think i like the last ad the best, with the tagline on the bottom right. It really emphasizes how large the staircase is, and it almost makes it look like the old man couldn't even start walking up the stairs. These look great!
Between the three ads I'd have to say that the typographical one is my favorite. There's a simplicity that's very effective and reminiscent of shoe ads. I would make the logo smaller because it's kind of rivaling the content at this point.
The first composition is probably the direction you should take because the others seem to have an external factor that pulls away from the spoof of New Balance. Also nice choice on the middle text flushed right, looks fab.
I think you have a really strong direction with these ads. I love that you have two very different types of ads, one with a photo and one being simply typographic, but they work well with one another. I think i like the last ad the best, with the tagline on the bottom right. It really emphasizes how large the staircase is, and it almost makes it look like the old man couldn't even start walking up the stairs. These look great!
ReplyDeleteBetween the three ads I'd have to say that the typographical one is my favorite. There's a simplicity that's very effective and reminiscent of shoe ads. I would make the logo smaller because it's kind of rivaling the content at this point.
ReplyDeleteThe first composition is probably the direction you should take because the others seem to have an external factor that pulls away from the spoof of New Balance. Also nice choice on the middle text flushed right, looks fab.
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