I like your concept a lot but I am not sure your most recent changes are purposed enough. I think you could drive the fact that you want the line vector thing to be the spray by moving it so it actually touches the spray can and then shoots out. I think it's a great concept and I like the idea of using vectors I just think you should drive your intent a little bit more. Otherwise great job though!
I love how you incorporate vector images in your work, but in this case, I liked it better before you added these in. I felt that the ad was strong enough without them. Maybe instead of the images, you could take just your Ulsneze logo and make it nice in the bottom right corner. It's a solid logo that I feel will get your point across.
I like your concept a lot but I am not sure your most recent changes are purposed enough. I think you could drive the fact that you want the line vector thing to be the spray by moving it so it actually touches the spray can and then shoots out. I think it's a great concept and I like the idea of using vectors I just think you should drive your intent a little bit more. Otherwise great job though!
ReplyDeleteI love how you incorporate vector images in your work, but in this case, I liked it better before you added these in. I felt that the ad was strong enough without them. Maybe instead of the images, you could take just your Ulsneze logo and make it nice in the bottom right corner. It's a solid logo that I feel will get your point across.
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