I really like this ad, but I think it would help if you changed the name of the brand to something other than Bix. We talked about this in the critique, but I think that maybe "Fix" would be a better name for it, playing on the idea that kids need their fix of sugary cereal. I would also try and make the rabbit's face a little chubbier if possible. Other than that, I think this ad will look really great. Also, good job creating the B. If you add a yellow stroke on the inside of the B where the holes are, it will make the letter look flat and a little more cohesive with the other letters.
I really like this ad, but I think it would help if you changed the name of the brand to something other than Bix. We talked about this in the critique, but I think that maybe "Fix" would be a better name for it, playing on the idea that kids need their fix of sugary cereal. I would also try and make the rabbit's face a little chubbier if possible. Other than that, I think this ad will look really great. Also, good job creating the B. If you add a yellow stroke on the inside of the B where the holes are, it will make the letter look flat and a little more cohesive with the other letters.
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