I think that the simplicity of the ad is really effective. It mimics the brand really well and there is no confusion about what is going on. I think the overall composition is successful as well. The only thing I think that might help is to maybe even make the legs look more exaggerated or maybe even bent. Because there aren't really any objects to compare here to it is kind of hard to see if she is leaning back or wobbling. Or if you want to keep the legs maybe little lines showing the wobbling will help.
Spot on with the stylistic choices that you are making in this piece. There seems to be no disconnect between the actual adverts and the spoof! I agree with Melissa that there needs to some more wibble in this girl's wobble. I am thinking that you could make the heel on the left shoe taller and then make that leg bent and leave the right leg straight. With this slight adjustment, I most certainly believe that this lady will be deserving of the most advantageous title of "Sloppy Girl Superstar."
I think that the design for this ad is very successful. It simple and clean and is easily recognizable and associated to skinny girl cocktails. I agree with the comments above, the figure needs to appear clumsier. Maybe you can tilt the figure slightly to the left. Or you can have the figure dropping her purse on the floor.
I am loving this composition. I like the suggestions already made but another possible way to show the girl as being sloppy could be to have her holding the drink like she is on the Skinny Girl bottle and have her bag on the ground. Maybe even the shoe it her hand.
I think that the simplicity of the ad is really effective. It mimics the brand really well and there is no confusion about what is going on. I think the overall composition is successful as well. The only thing I think that might help is to maybe even make the legs look more exaggerated or maybe even bent. Because there aren't really any objects to compare here to it is kind of hard to see if she is leaning back or wobbling. Or if you want to keep the legs maybe little lines showing the wobbling will help.
ReplyDeleteSpot on with the stylistic choices that you are making in this piece. There seems to be no disconnect between the actual adverts and the spoof! I agree with Melissa that there needs to some more wibble in this girl's wobble. I am thinking that you could make the heel on the left shoe taller and then make that leg bent and leave the right leg straight. With this slight adjustment, I most certainly believe that this lady will be deserving of the most advantageous title of "Sloppy Girl Superstar."
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ReplyDeleteI think that the design for this ad is very successful. It simple and clean and is easily recognizable and associated to skinny girl cocktails. I agree with the comments above, the figure needs to appear clumsier. Maybe you can tilt the figure slightly to the left. Or you can have the figure dropping her purse on the floor.
ReplyDeleteI am loving this composition. I like the suggestions already made but another possible way to show the girl as being sloppy could be to have her holding the drink like she is on the Skinny Girl bottle and have her bag on the ground. Maybe even the shoe it her hand.
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